What Have I Become ...

by FountainsOfBlood   Jun 16, 2007


I stand silenced,
A witness to a suicide,
Of a forgotten angel.

Her body faint,
Lifeless to the people,
But alive to the shadows.

I watch her being taken,
To a place of sorrow for souls,
Were there's no tomorrow.

Looking over at the body,
I see she was me,
And I was her.

Is this real?
Am I really dead?
If so, what have I become?

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  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    Thank you all for the nice comments! They are very much appreciated! XD
    Sarah xx

  • 16 years ago

    by sadeyes

    I love this poem and it is so deep

  • 16 years ago

    by Topshop princess

    I watch her being taken,
    To a place of sorrow for souls,
    Were there's no tomorrow.

    Looking over at the body,
    I see she was me,
    And I was her.

    i love this poem, this part in particular has such an impact, beautifully penned poem, the flow was fluent throughout.
    Great job 5/5 xx

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