Comments : Eyes of a child

  • 16 years ago

    by Elise

    Hey that was awesome!!
    good work, had a lot of meaning n can relate to it so easily
    luv ya

  • 16 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    I can really relate to this poem gurl. Great work! 10/10

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    This was a great piece of work really amazing dark write keep it up

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Qpid

    Ow this poem is soO good!.rly nice..luvd the words....keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    Sad and emotional you are an excellent writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    A dark past explained with incredible emtion....

  • 16 years ago

    by MicHaEL iS SaVinG ThE DaY

    Nice poem. i like it.=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is really a beautiful sad poem. I loved the word choice and the flow was perfect :) All the way 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • Beautiful written, good word choice and smooth flow.Another great poem.5/5

    <3Amber