Sold

by RavishingEruption   Jun 18, 2007


By myself I sit, thinking of my thoughts
Cupid shooting arrows for my love that's lost

Hearts and wedding bells flout through my heavy head
Washed away by ever single tear that I had shed

Your gone and I'm alone
Without you here, my heart is stone

No one could replace you
Because they never knew

We shared a love so deep and pure
It's so hard to live without you

Time will never erase my feelings
Nor fix my weeping heart broken from all these nights we spend apart

I'm alone without a friend
Without a caring one to hold

I gave out on you and now my love is sold....

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  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Like it....but did not quite capture me

  • 16 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Good poem, although it has some imperfections.. but the message was clear, and the fact that I can relate to it made me like it that much more ..: ) a 5/5 from me!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    That was a very great poem =) I totally relate to it except he's the one that threw it away not me =(
    I give it a well deserved 5 =)
    Keep it up,
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Wowwww... so good! the wai u hv expressed ur feelingz is reali gr8 in this poem.. i can relate 2 these feelingz vry much..
    hope all works out well
    .x

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