My Love For You Is Forever True

by Valdo   Jun 18, 2007


My love for you is forever true
I'm sorry I can't help but fall for you

I want to heal you of your pain
to show true love does not disdain

I show my feelings but they arn't shown back
please tell me what it is i lack

I long to be the one you love
i guess it's just not the plan from above

If it is or isn't I will not dread
I'm happy just being your friend

But know my love for you is forever true
trust me it's all for you

This is the first poem i have ever written in my life i just decided to try a few nights ago let me know what ya'll think

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh wow..nice

  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Pretty good Valdo. Good flow. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MandiMae

    I have to say you have some amazing talent
    It's too bad you didn't start writing sooner.
    5/5
    Mandi-Mae

  • 16 years ago

    by FallenAngel

    An excellent piece. Flows very smoothly. You certainly have some talent, keep it up. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for your new poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by PANDAomgwtf

    This poem is amazing. I really like it.

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