To Nallely

by Valdo   Jun 18, 2007


I know your heart hurts
I see your pain
He's stinking
He has no shame

You may deny it
of that there's no doubt
but he was never fit
for the love your about

He'll be missing out
on the love you can give
and because of this
how could you forgive

But don't let this stumble
bring about your fall
instead just be humble
and give it your all

you have those around you
who really do care
who show you love
and have bonds that you share

so do me a favor
and always remember
we really love you
now and forever

(this one i wrote for one of my best friends nallely)

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  • 16 years ago

    by MandiMae

    I love this poem You have talent for writing don't ever stop. This is defineately a 5/5 could you please read and comment some of mine?

  • 16 years ago

    by FallenAngel

    Well written, has a nice flow of words , very well thought out how it flows, starting from a first , pain-filled verse to the 2nd last and last verses, filled with love and care.