You've seen a Ghost?

by Richard Machado   Jun 19, 2007


I once saw a ghost
Right beside my bed, it was
I tossed and screamed aloud
And, over my head was a cloud

A dream, alas, I was
Dreaming of a ghost
Beside while napping
I awoke with the cracking

Waning bedroom door
Slippery slithers prepare for gore
Then, I saw a shadow
Crawl across my bedroom floor

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  • 16 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    I like the choice of words. very creative. i do believe in ghost and felt like i have seen one lol. great write =]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Very well written. I loved the way that the last stanza just blew my mind. Lol. Very short albeit very creepy. Great job!
    Alex.

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Very good but very short i would like to continue reading....lol great job always leave ppl asking for more right?

    -laura-

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Wow..I Really like thye imagery this poem had..The flow was also good...The wording was just right...Overall 5/5...Keep It Up..Your A Good Writter...

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Hmm...some interesting things. I kinda like the imagery cuz...well it's vivid yet vague leaving room for the imagination. Third stanza ended this piece on a strong note and the beginning nicely draws you into it except... There's something about the fourth line of the first stanza that I kinda don't like. Maybe it's the flow. But other than that awesome write.
    ~Faith-less

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