She's Gone To Hell

by CHOKE   Jun 19, 2007


Tears fall
From her mascara stained face
She's leaving this world
And not a minute too late

She's letting go
Of everything she once knew
She's leaving behind
Her world askew

The tear drops remain
But her breath does not
She's left this place
As another heart, the world forgot

She left
And not a minute too late
She had to leave
She just couldn't wait

She was too broken
She couldn't be fixed
Death was just another addiction
One she couldn't kick

Now she's gone
And you can only smile
You pretend to care
You swear saying things vile

You look down and laugh
She's gone to hell
You wish her the very best
In the place she fell

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  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow,

    She was too broken
    She couldn't be fixed
    Death was just another addiction
    One she couldn't kick
    ^^^DEFINETLY LOVED THIS!!!

    It was another ((amazing)) poem :D I loved it, it was so sad, and deep, and emotional, I loved it....

  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow,

    She was too broken
    She couldn't be fixed
    Death was just another addiction
    One she couldn't kick
    ^^^DEFINETLY LOVED THIS!!!

    It was another ((amazing)) poem :D I loved it, it was so sad, and deep, and emotional, I loved it....

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    EXCELLENT.

    [Deathly'Amore]

  • 16 years ago

    by neverisme

    Wow 10/10 welldone

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i thought it was great, so deep and well it is so sad. my fave lines are.
    She was too broken
    She couldn't be fixed
    Death was just another addiction
    One she couldn't kick

    it is so true, and was you do it you cant go back, i almost killed myself once but my friend found me. but over all, i loved it awesome write, 5/5

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