Dark

by TaTy   Apr 22, 2004


Everything around me is turning black
Who turned out the lights?
My heart is falling back.

I can’t see you,
Do you see me?
Oh wait, of course you can’t
Because the me you see is the me I pretend to be.

I’m a fake,
I’m pretend,
I lie about who I am.

Don’t want anyone to know,
How sad I really am,
That each night before I go to bed,
I wish that I were dead.

My prayer is to god,
Please take me home with you,
Don’t let me breath,
Just take me away form all this misery.

But the me you see is happy,
A fake smile from ear to ear,
When deep inside I’m yelling,
Please take away this fear.

Don’t give up on me,
Please find out where I am,
I’m lost inside the way,
It’s cold and dark and grey.

I’m starting to sink,’
It’s getting dizzy and hot,
This pain hurts too much,
Please baby just make it stop.

How do I find the light?
Why did you go away?
Please hurry back to me,
Before it’s too late!!

--I write poems on how I feel, what lies inside me just seems to flow into the words you read. If you have time please comment and vote, It means a lot to me to see what you all think. Thank you so much, Kristy__-
Written by: Kristin Nicole

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  • 20 years ago

    by Chrissy

    Seriously I love your poem. Thing is, it's exactly the way I feel at times. You are really talented, and I would love to read more of your stuff. Wow. A total 5!!

  • 20 years ago

    by TaTy

    Brittany. of course I don't mind actually i don't know what to say. thank you =)

  • 20 years ago

    by wicked with wings

    hey that was an awsome poem and i haven't checked ur other but from what i hear they r all good so if u don't mind i want to add u to my favorites

  • 20 years ago

    by TaTy

    Thank you so much for those who comment and vote for my poem. It really means a lot to me. Thank you!
    And yes I write what I really feel, I love to write, and it helps me get out what I feel on paper, when I am unable to express it in person to others sometimes. All my poems are true, thank you again to all of you =)

  • 20 years ago

    by nichole

    that was AWESOME!! keep up the good work and dont give up!! just remember there is always someone you can talk to-friends, parents, a counsleor, or a support group but i KNOW you will get through it! dont give up girl! & you have a true gift with writing! keep it up!