Very good language use and very good flow. also love the title captured me to read it. well done xxxxxxxx

This poem flows smoothly and uses nice elements. great job on this. 5/5.

Although the poem was really short I thought you did an excellent job with it, the imagery and flow were both fantastic. Our lives are just like flowers in many ways, we start off as a seed and blossom into something beautiful and unique, but with time we die. Excellent job 5/5

Beautiful
I like the last verse..It was haunting but in that beautiful sorta way lol.
Im confusing myself now so ill just shut up
good job though and if you could please comment back on any of mine then thanks
<3Elizabeth

Superb dear, Its just outstanding. I loved reading this piece. Its short but very sweet. I loved your wordings and the beautiful rhymes. Great work worth 5/5

With love
Fsams

Oooooo - that was really good. :) I liked the flow the most - it had like a beat or rhythm to it... know what I mean?

Very good language used too. (I hate writing these comments cause they always sound so fake and like Im an English teacher marking an essay... but thats what I thought anyway!) :)

Mo
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Tears in the distance,
Another waking lie,
Broken flowers dying,
i loved these three lines alot. that was nicely panned and written aswell. you have talent.
i am giving you 5/5

Nice poem =) I love this part:

"Tears in the distance,
Another waking lie,
Broken flowers dying,
As the world starts to cry"

Keep writing! Could you comment on of my poems as well ^^, ?

xxx

Good vocab and great flow really liked it over all really good enjoyed every word of it! 5/5 keep up the great work

How endearing. I liked how you portrayed a flower (a person) broken by the storms of trials and challenges in life - so metaphorical. I further liked how you vividly expressed yourself! So, on the whole, it's a fine work of art. 5/5 Keep on writing. I hope you all the best and take care.

Marian

It was so sad and sorrowful and there were so many words that are so powerful and so true,like;

''Love lost in the lust,''

Yes I agree with that..and I really liked the ending
Take care,
Laura

Wow, i loved this poem really :)
my favourite stanza was,
"Tears in the distance,
Another waking lie,
Broken flowers dying,
As the world starts to cry"
although every stanza was completely amazing. :)
keep up the great work, 5/5.

I love this. It has beautiful imagery and it flowed nicely. You're extremely talented. Congrats on creating this amazing poem.

Well.. this poem is amazing.. although short, u hav captured all the deep emotions very well.. gr8 poet.. keep writing..
take care
.x

You know I love your poems, and this one is excellent as well. I love the imagery and the symbolism. It makes me think a bit, while other things just come right out at me. I really enjoyed reading it. 5/5

Ravyn

So much passion and emotion! Well done

Yea..id pretty much give this a ten. but since that it could only go to a 5 then thats what i gave u..lol..good job i love it

I love the flow, such a beautiful piece, it's unbelieveably sad, yet so wonderful.

Very nice poem.
A great rhyming and I like the words you chose.
Really enjoyed reading it.
Well done

I USED THE SAME TITLE FOR JENNA'S CONTEST!!! haha but i like your poem more then i like mine. tehe . you are truely a great writer. keep up the good work and you will be making a million books of your own. :)