Really liked it!!

Aw, this is very well written.

The repititions were nice, but the whol tool idea, i dont get it. i'm probably just being stupid. the flow to the poem was nice though.

thanks for the comment.

A beautiful piece of poetry 5/5 i like the way you wrote it

Cheers
xD
~NinjaGirl~

*sigh* I think having to forget about a person that you love and move on is one of the hardest things we have to do =(

I completely relate except that I don't want to have to talk to him or his girlfriend anymore =P

This one is full of the heartfelt emotion that flows so strongly through all your poetry and thats what makes it such a pleasure to read =) 5/5 Like always =D

Thanks, Rhea

Great poem.Exspecially for a newbie.lol

What a sad piece you have penned. Very heart felt.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

Well written,really talented writer
when you have the time,please look over my work and lemme know what you think.
take care

Wow, been here done that. It's so hard to forget about the past. In everything we do and say something of the past is remembered in every little thing. Awesome write.
Kay

Good write...forgetting the memories and the past is often hard to do. good write.