The sentiment here is very good. However, if you're looking for an honest critique the structure of this poem isn't very good and you should perhaps have proof-read it before publishing. This is just my opinion as a fan of traditional poetry and English use, of course.

I loved it, it's very simple but in away that's good, it gives more of an affect to the poem. It's very meaningful and can be related to by many peopl :)
I like it alot Keep it up x

"Your beauty's on the outside but hers is on the in.
Know tell me who's more beautiful, cause beauty's from within."
^^^^My Favorite Part

I Always Get Called Too Thin, And I Hate It Because I'm Happy With Who lam Just Like The Lovely Women Who Have 'Extra Baggage" Are Just Fine With Who They Are Yet Theres Always Someone With a Negative Remark...I Think This Poem Says Alot To Me..And I Love Poetry I Can Relate To...I Don't Know Why I'm The First To Vote This Poem a 5.0...

xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Hmm..very intersting, i completely agree with this poem, it is very truthful. good write.