Comments : Thanks For The Memories

  • 12 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww it reminds me of someone :( Anyway it's really good. I like the rhyming in it and great vocab. 5/5! as always

  • 12 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Amazing poem ...i dont think it could me any more perfectly writen....

    ashleigh

    thx for commenting :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Perfection

    A very dramatical poem... suicide because of a broken heart... It rhymes very well... the rain was a nice trick for a dramatic enviroment... works like an amplifier... Ending was good since the titel is mentioned ... It leaves a strong effect...

    A very good poem bryan =)

  • 12 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Wow! amazing! loved it! keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Oh man! Great write Bryan! I love it, all of it; the words, the flow, the way it felt to read...perfect! I really loved how you put the title in the last line, and how you used rain and moon light for the dramatic effect. Keep it up!

    ~Morgan~

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Yeah, very dramatic. I could never pull that off... and you even threw "Tear drops on my guitar" in there... hah, good song... loved the last stanza.

  • 12 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Wow?....Nice poem...It's very emotional and very to the point. It's very sad actually...and its got so much feeling in it. I loved the "The tear drops on my guitar" sentence very much, like a lot of other people who commented above me. It's a beautiful write...really/...

  • 12 years ago

    by Debbie

    How poignant. Methought this piece was quite spectacular and never failed to strike a chord with me.
    Lovely work, m'dear.

    Debbie cakes (^^,)

  • 12 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was great and sad wow beautiful 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    The flow in this was good. A sad piece. Nice job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Melpomene

    A different piece from you too me I found this to be a different style you have taken up from you other recent poems and I really loved it. The two line stanzas were really effective in the two lines you held so much beautifully sad emotions. Again Bryan a piece of amazement viewed in my eyes. Well done ~mel

  • 12 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    Oh my gosh, you are making me very emotions right now bc you wrote such a beautiful poems. In deep inside. Yeah, good job and keep it up 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sandra D

    AHHHHHH!!
    another amazingly beautiful poem!
    i could really relate to this... i felt the sadness she felt... i knew what she was going through, why she was doing what she was.
    the flow and rhymes were perfect (as always)
    the is definately goin into my faves
    great job!
    5/5

    ~Sandra