I love this pome
it's full of hate and anger!
and you express your-self in a Unique way!
5/5

Wow very deep..... I LOVE IT!!!!! 5/5

Wow... very... speechless... (lol)
That a very well written poem! Can't really add to that lol. 5/5
Sarah xx XD

I love this poem short i specially like the line "this memory I will forever treasure" very good 5/5 x

Wow! powerful stuff! its official i'm def a fan!

If words could kill then we would all be burning in hell.

Oh my heck! That was so hateful! Your words painted a very dark picture in my head! Whoa!!! Keep it up!!

Very descriptive. I like the choice of words a lot, and I think they fit the poem well. 5/5 : )

Wow, good one good one:):)

I loved it girl:):)

keep it up:):)

khuloodan:)
smile all the time:)

Very nice. It's sadistic. Sadaly I must admit i only wish i could see a few people i know suffer like that,lol. keep it up 5^5

To me poems full of anger and hate are always great....but this is one of my favs. great work...keep it up 5^5

Really like this one

Nicely done ...to hate ppl and kill them it muz be nice man..sadly,theres no1 i hate ta t much to kill...but soon the police would be after mi if i killed someone lols

Killer I loved it you can see the words leap off the page and go into a picture of what is happening
carly

Your poem makes me want to evily cackle into the screen. Haha. Very violent! This was a good poem. The structure was nice, and words flowed.

5/5.

Great expession of anger and violence. so powerful and quite deep. i loved it 5/5.

Wow..this was truly good.I could feel the emotion you must have been feeling while writing. Nicely written.5/5
Brit

Amazingly awsome!!!

*whispers*.. wow... absolutely stunning... I totally got the image in my head.. excellent work =) 5/5

Strong emotions in this one, a lot of hate, good, so long as you don't do this in real life lol. i love this one.