Gosh! Your such an amazing poet! You really are! Your work is amazing and and again i can't say much only apart from wow! 5/5 XD
Sarah xx

Love it!!!!

Great job!! 5/5 i love that poem!!! n.n
~*~Skye~*~

Oh my giddy aunt! i loved it! it really flowed! keep it up!

Oh man, I seriously envy you! Your poems are so amazing! The pain you let out into it is purly...whoa...I love all of it! GREAT JOB!!!

~Morgan~

Awesome job. i enjoyed it. keep up the good work

Once again great job...i love it....maybe u should add onto it a little bit....maybe something like wat the mirror says back?........just a suggestion

Wow, this one was a bit mind boggling ;p
my favourite part was,
"The story starts with once upon a time, Dreaming about a life that was never mine."
that part alone drew me in and kept me there.
5/5.

Really powerful! 5/5

Yet another amazing poem! this poem questions God's authority and truth, buit also questions reality! this poem is fantastic!
--TheGothicAlbino

Another beautiful write! love love love the last line" I ask the mirror do you reflect me? or do i reflect you? " All your poems are short, yet so strongly portrayed. ^_^ You have my vote!

No offense to V1v1d S0rr0w but poems are not all ment to be in the kind of poetry form. its good the way it is. putting it that way give the poet a sense of originality and thats a key thing to have. great poem.

I love your poem it is sort of sad but you work out the real meaning without having to think 5/5

Great poem, short but excellently written. I like the first stanza the most, topic is good too.5/5

Alot of imagery. really well done 5/5

O0o0o0o! I like this one! a great question posed at the end. This poem will definitely make people think when they're done reading it. ;) nice job!

Wow! Wow! Wow! This is a poem i can relate to! Well done!