Great poem i love it!

I really liked reading this peom its so meaningful and it shows so many emotions :) liked it x

Lovely poem
It is meaningful
Very Emotional.
Only make it a bit longer.
But its good like this too!
Very nice

Keep Smiling x

Whoa...That was very full of emotions. Your words were used so well. I loved it! Great write!

Great Job!
One suggestion, try and put your words into stanzas.
If you want anymore commented just let me know!
5/5

Wonderfully written, a joy to comment.

Very nice. Overall, meaningful and flows well, couple of grammar mistake though. Very good : )

Very nice. Overall, meaningful and flows well, couple of grammar mistake though. Very good : )

Great poem it flows well

I loved it very much:):):)

great job girl for sure:):):)

khuloodan:)
smile all the time:)

Wow deep...loved it! keep up the work!! :)

Great poem...u've got some real talent so dont let anybody tell u any different

In general this is a great poem, but i found several errors.

"I'm stuck in a place,
a hell I call home.

Where demons brake my innocence and taunt my soul,
I can never [BREAK] free from this eternal pain.

All I feel is shame and rejection, but most of all I'm filled with sorrow.

With scarlet [SCARS] upon my wrist, I now know nothing is what it seems.
I have nothing...I am nothing,

Exaggerating the barrier between who I am and who they want me to be...my soul fades. "

THERE WERE PLACES WHERE FLOW WASN'T COMPLETELY THERE. SOME STANZAS COULD'VE BEEN BROUGHT TOGETHER, AND SOME COULD'VE BEEN ADDED TO.

I'll read one more of yours.

=]

please, if you have time, read a couple of mine?

Nice poeem..Goood job! Keep iiit upp!

Nice poeem..Goood job! Keep iiit upp! 5/5

Wow this is a very well written poem, it caught me in a net that made me not want to stop reading. it had alot of feeling in it, and i can tell many others like it as well. ^^
Luvs,
DeadGirl

Amazing poem! i couldn't pick out a favourite part because i loved every bit of it. you're doing great so keep up the good work. 5/5.

I think that this poem has potential.However, there are spots in which it didnt completely flow.
Where demons break my innocence and taunt my soul....I thought this was a splendid line...and probably my favorite from the poem. Overall it wasnt bad...just the flowing issue..otherwise keep up the good work.

Brit

I absolutley love this poem! I can totally relate to it...keep up the good work.

Its great, i felt the emotion, thats what make people great poetry writers, when they can make their readers feel the emotion of the poem. and i felt it.