Dont cry

by Himmel   Jun 21, 2007


Even though u have your times
Times were u r negative
Times were u doubt
Times when u say stuff u don't mean to say
Don't cry

I will always be there for u
I may get mad
But not for long
I never can be mad at some1 as amazing as u
Don't cry

I'm sorry for getting upset with u
During those times
I will always be by your side
Don't cry

I need you like the wolf needs the moon to guide it threw the night
Without the moon
The wolf would be lost
Blind
No where to go
Don't cry

The moon may eclipse on the wolf
But the wolf will wait it out n stay strong
We may have our eclipse like the wolf
That eclipse only last for so long
Just remember when that moon comes back
I will be there waiting for u to make it full again
Don't cry

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  • 16 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    As I'm too lazy to repeat what has already been said, I'll just say I agree with Jordan and Jess on this one. Very poor. Try again.

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    I agree with everybody else when it comes to the grammer.It would make this poem SOOOO much better if you would correct the grammer in this poem.But other then that I didn't see anything else that you could really fix.Umm..it would be better if you used more vivid vocabulary.I still give it a 5/5 though because of the emotion that you did put into it.^-^

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by bacha

    I loved it very much, keep it up:):)

    i will give ya 5/5:):)

    khuloodan:)
    smile all the time:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Sweet and well written. Like Mandy said the connection between your longing for the person in the poem and the wolfs need for the moon has a pretty powerful message. I also liked the moon/eclipse comparison. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    Thats so sweet.
    Great poem

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