Wow, i actually really like this poem. a lot. but i dont think that "Walk by in elegance, with a sensual stare," <-- that line flows.. idk why but it just doesnt.. and caugh caugh..prettygirl..caughcaugh! jk jk. but uhm yeah i really like this poem!!! good job love!! <33

Wow, the best thing that attracted me to read and rate this poem is the beautiful headline. Its really catching and you ahve the creativity to make readers engaged. This such a beautiful and superb poem. Max ratings dear

With love
Fsams

I loved it, it was beautifully written, the content was good, the structure was great. i thought it was awesome. 5/5

You are just some alcoholic beauty,
Steeling away her much pain with her sex,
Cleaning up and then just walking out,
Only to see who's staring next.

my fave lines^^

I really enjoyed this piece, the words were strong and the flow was great. So many women live this lifestyle and they think they get respect when it's just the opposite. But like you say in the poem they live the lifestyles they choose. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

I liked it. It was sad in a way. The word choice was great and the format used was perfect for this poem. I gave it a 5/5.

You really did a great job with this theme for my taste you took it in the right direction the rhyme scheme also was enjoyable

Wow. amazing poem for a topic of such debate. beautifully written.lines and stanzas and words all go together perfectly. i loved it. and look forward to reading more work of yours

"And the facade that you so gladly wear."

I loved that line the most...the whole poem is an ode to..well, I dont want to get crude..so mad respect to you for finally laying it all on the table..you did it very tastefully without having the...bitter girly side to it..if that makes sense lol..amazing work!!!!

Beautiful headline. The story you are telling is so true n it was really sad. Amazing poem!
Keep writing 5/5

Almost too much for me but still excellent! i loved it! flow was nice and the theme was perfectly demonstrated. great job!

I love this poem....unfortunately i used to be able to relate to it....luckily my bf now told me no and opened my eyes a bit....anyway....loved it!!! it shows true meaning and greatly observing eyes!!!

I love this poem,i can tell y ppl really like it, good work 5/5

I loved the last stanza in this poem. great job x

Oh wow - this one was a great read. The ending gave me goosebumps. I'll definitely be reading more of your work.

I've never written a risque' poem before, but you've showed me that they can be meaningful instead of just trashy. Might be inspiration for me to write one - so, thanks!!

~Tara

Love the use of your words..best poe on here

This is an amazing poem! i know some people that act like that and its just crazy! this is deffinitely a 5/5!!

THAT WAS AMAZING. PERFECT.
5/5!!! They should make it a song!