Taken Away....

Very nice poem !!
Good writing, kind of deep & meaningful.
I may not know the pain you are in right now, but i do feel a little bit of it when im reading this poem.

Keep up the good work.

And no my dera you are not selfish at all for I have been in your shoes and I know just how u feel and I to wanted my light back so dont feel guilty at all we all have our own way of dealin with pain and loss. 5/5

This is really quite sad, it makes me feel really sad for you. the words are simple yet effective, the length short but penetrating. well done and keep writing xx

This is a heartful poem.
Good job christine!!!