by Nathan Turner Jun 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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We were great when we were together, and I remember your face when I said together, forever |
by Aimee Dawn
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I thought the poem was really good. |
by Faith Davis
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Wow i liked this one a lot also! |
by Mezmeryz
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Wow this is so sad, but sweet, especially the last line. i enjoyed the detail, and the emotions touched deep. keep it up =] |
by Lover Boii
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It has a lot of emotion in it, and some contrast feelings. I like it a lot. Keep up the good work. |
by PygmyPuff
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There are so many references to outside elements. Its like a walking metaphore, its amazing. The strusture is strange, but youre consistant so you must like it. It just doesnt designate where the reader should put emphasist. I would recomentd trying to create more more traditional structure while maintaing your own personal flair. |