I like this poem alot
5/5

Wow that was a really good poem 5/5 for sure.

I loved this poem alot. the rhyming was a little off and so was the flow. but i loved it, the whole concept of this piece was truly stunning. 5/5

A stunning write.
I must be honest, I don't usually like commenting slang poetry- do to the lack of grahmar- but with your's it didn't really feel like i was reading one.
I thought you did a captivating job, Tha word choice was amazing, and it flowed great.
You really proved me wrong, and surprised me by doing so,
Well done,
Elaine.

I may say, this one is a well written piece. I liked how you portrayed Eden, it was really great. I liked it very much.

I love your word choices. "an open casket of reality" "merciless fire". I also like the part "would you let the blue flame burn our little paradise"

Would you let me fall,
from broken promise of eternity?
Or will you ever save my soul,
from falling to unwanted misery?

nice rhyming...5/5 ^_^ i love the emotion

Amazing!
simply amazing!

..yun lang..^__^

I like it because it was meanfull and it rhym ( I like when it rhym ) and you got it to sound well. good job

I LUV THIS POEM!!

Filled with emotion. Beautiful write.

_Sam

I really like this poem, i like the questions do you really care, cuz i can relate. i hate when people are fake and dont really care, yet they say that they do. idk, those were my thoughts as i read ur poem. =]