Wow..let me ask ya somethin....y the heck r ppl not readin this!! its very good in my oppion and i luved the ryhme..at first the first stanza i thought..this should b in dark but this is very good so a 5/5!

Hmm... you are right.. i oughta change the cathegory...
thanks for advice...

Beautiful, this is so touching and if I have read this before now I would of told you to send it to that man. I love your soft, but harsh touch, 5/5.

This line:
‘I'd follow you forever, you always command’

Should, you always, be, your always? I’m just checking. Thank you for commenting on my poems. I appreciate it a lot.

You can erase the one with; this line and this one, put it on the wrong poem of yours, sorry.

I can see the buring forest, carless people destroying it...you speak such powerful words.

"Leaves are burning on the ground
We all fall, without a sound
We can't cry and we can't moan
We are lost, we are alone"

I love this stanza, the flow is amazing and you can picture what is happening.

"Why must burning be our fate?
Why can't forests have their faith?
Flowers whisper a last word
No belief... A cruel world"

I like this stanza but it appears as though you ended the poem too soon. The flow in this stanza is more choppy compared to the rest of the poem.

All in all, a poem filled with true emotion and power. A strong message is in this poem and I think you have some great talent. Please keep writing, I'd love to read more.

xo

This poem reflects on the unforgivng horror of natural or man made disaster Very well written
5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Very good poem it was sad but true. The wording was great and let out great emotion. I love trees and well that kind of thing happens to them to often. If there no being cut down there is a wild fire consuming them. I gave this poem a 5/5.