Sooo sweet and sad i can relate to this one real well very good job depth and hard work was pt in it and you can tell

I like your poem and its fiction to you but reality to me.=]so yep keep up the good work

I like this poem, nice descriptions of certain stuff :)

Niice poem :D like it

This poem was indeed sad,deep and emotional.I can relate to it very well.You have written this very nicely.The imagery was pefect and the flow was even better.The first two stanza went very well.The moment I read this it got stuch through my head.You have written this so beautifully.You have really worked hard for this.You have described your emotions very well.And the ryhming was good enough!!Hope to see another poem of yours.Till then
Take care
And best wishes

The favorite line is i got the power to ask why it was too cool but i sensed a bit desperation from the gal point of view truly i got a picture in mind may such things never happen to anyone

Evertime i read your work, i expect pure beauty, and i am amazed how better each poem gets, you are so talented, keep writing
xxxxxx

I thought it was very sad
but there was a sense of
beauty coursing
throughout this poek
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i loved it

5/5

It is great! You expressed emotions excellent. It is good dark poem, but maybe you could use stronger words to make better atmosphere. It could be a little deeper. Anyway this poem deserves 5/5 but I think that you can do it even more better.
Keep up, write more dark poems and I will read them.

Yeah, I love dark poetry! This one is really good, it could be a little deeper, but good, anyway.
Emotions are well expressed, fourth stanza is my favorite.
Keep up! 5/5

Very sad. I liked it. The word choice was great. I gave it a 5/5.

I like the imagery created in the poem. Good job, excellent choice of words, and the opening line is really powerful.

Now, I normally despise self harm poems, they`re all so cliched..but this one, having such an amazing story behind it, really kept my attention. Your vocab is great, imagery is amazing, and talent is very impressive.

This poem is great, in a way some people could argue and say it`s bad because it gives people the idea of an easy way out if someone leaves them, which is true...but yet at the same time, it is what a lot of people do..they don`t need a poem to tell them what to do; you just took that and made it into a piece of amazing literature..kudos.

For the first time of reading your work, I am really caught off guard; I`m going to keep my eye on your work and I will keep posting comments and seeing you improve..I really like your work so far.

5.5
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Wow this poem is beautiflully written, it is sad but excellent well done
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