I just loved this stanza:
But no matter what happens in life
We always have ourselves
To pick us up from our own graves
For never is life always swell'
the lines are written so well.
and its very true.
5/5 once again.
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So true..thxs 4 making me think bout the brightsides of life and takin the chance of goin uphill...a 5/5

Good poem...i really like it..

5/5

It's a good poem, I like the message in it. Just a suggestion though.. To use punctuations.. Because "a poem without a punctuation is like a song without a tune." =)

Keep up the good work.

ThatS lovelY......

Its lovely..... I do appreciate...

Nazeer