Sorry We Failed
by Nathan Turner Jun 24, 2007
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The way I am now, I just want to engrave your name in my arm |
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16 years ago
This poem is well written, although you had a spelling error with REALIZED. Although you probably knew that =]. Anywho, the poem was really good. I liked it a lot. Kind of relates me to an old situation I was in a year ago. 5/5. Good work.
~Arissa -
16 years ago
AWWW!!! so sweet.
a real expression of tru love!!! -
16 years ago
This is very heart felt. It screams of regret and sadness. It's a very well written poem, structured nicely and flows very well. I can't get over the emotion in this poem, it's sooo good. 5/5
Much Love,
.:Danielle:. -
16 years ago
Firstly, it's spelt "realized".
Secondly, I really like this, because its so common between people.
But, as we all learn, you can't hold on to your regrets.
Good poem, Nathan.
Take care,
not-bulletproof. -
16 years ago
by Mel
The emotion and honesty in it was great. it kind of seemed like you forced the rhyme sometimes though. still, it was good.
