Very very well written. This is probably my favorite of yours. <33

I'm sorry it didn't work out for you =\

...just remember if you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here!

Is this true? if it is nice job expressing ur emotions... if not, well, good job expressing emotions ROFL
keep up the good work

Yeah it is true lol

Nice wonderful poem. it's short but so full of emotion it doesn't need to be longer. i love it darlin' LOVE IT nice work

Beautiful poem man. It did a darn good job at expressing your emotions. I am sorry that it did not work out for you, but you just gotta keep truckin' on.

Yea its great
ur good
hey read sum of mine
lyk he loves me he loves me not

I really liked this one.. i really like the way it was written and the way you told the story.. this seems like something a lot of people go through when they are in a relationship.. you did a good job of putting your emotions to words.. excellent job.. keep it up =]

I liked the way you expressed your emotion, but I thought that you put too much effort into rhyming. I think your poetry could improve a little if you express what you want to say then try to adjust it to suit how you want it styled. I do think you did good on this poem though.

Hm, its a bit shaky in the flow but i think it is overall a pretty good poem nathan, i give you a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

I can relate to this poem... it is sad, and love really does suck...5/5.. check out my poetry...

Very nice peom
yet again wonderful work
I understand, totally.
I give this one a 5/5
it may be short but it is definitely good.
Keep writing.
XOXO
Chelsey

Wow that is deep... I love it!!! Really awesome and very well written. Keep up the great work Nathan.

Beck

Wow, that's really good, the phrase "you never know what you've got until it's gone" comes to mind when i read this. Very well written!

Hey its real good and true.5/5

This is a beautiful poem!
i love ever part of it!
amazing job!
5/5
--Jess
=]

The emotion and honesty in it was great. it kind of seemed like you forced the rhyme sometimes though. still, it was good.

Firstly, it's spelt "realized".
Secondly, I really like this, because its so common between people.
But, as we all learn, you can't hold on to your regrets.
Good poem, Nathan.

Take care,
not-bulletproof.

This is very heart felt. It screams of regret and sadness. It's a very well written poem, structured nicely and flows very well. I can't get over the emotion in this poem, it's sooo good. 5/5

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

AWWW!!! so sweet.
a real expression of tru love!!!

This poem is well written, although you had a spelling error with REALIZED. Although you probably knew that =]. Anywho, the poem was really good. I liked it a lot. Kind of relates me to an old situation I was in a year ago. 5/5. Good work.

~Arissa