This poem is really good.
i think it was really good how you used the repetition of the first stance
:)

Oh i love this!...rly nice mate keep it up!

Your words were so deep, they were magical. this is superb. well done.

5/5 David

There are moments in life we feel as if we've been set on a road to hell filled of hate, pain and fear. I can't say that I know what this feels like because that would be a lie, This is something that will stay with you forever you'll never forget back you can forgive and let go so you can live your life. loved it!
5/5!

Beautiful poem.
Deep emotions.
Wonderful piece of writing.
Take care

Ps. thanks for commenting my poems, I really appreciate it!

I can relate to this poem. It's very deep, with excellently expressed emotions. First stanza is my favorite, I like the choice of words in it.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

Wow, greatly written poem. It is unique and emotions are described excellently. I like it very much, 5/5

I like this poem because i can relate to it. i have felt like that before and hate the feeling that i dont belong anywhere and that i shouldnt of been born. its like nothing that u do helps take the pain away.

Your poem is sad and emotional dont give up on life just keep writing

Meaningfull, make sure those thoughts and efforts stay on the page :)

Hmm I can feel the pain you've portrayed, very good....

Ohh so sad and full of emtion.
but it was a great poem.
i can really relate to that.
its awesome
i love it =]

5/5

xo.louiii

I could feel the emotion from this poem. It gave me chills. I really liked it. 5/5