This World

by Norbert   Jun 24, 2007


This World is in pain.
The people here are insane.

This World is crazy.
most of the people here are lazy

This World is filled with hate,
Since beginning of time to this very date.

This World is a place to be in fear
where kids die and families burst into tears

This World does not care.
It doesn't matter if your rich or on welfare.
It doesn't matter what class your in.
It only matter on the places you been.

This world ain't easy as taking a walk around the lake
But you can survive in this World if you know which road to take
And it only matters on the choices you make.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marjan

    “most of the people here are lazy”
    I couldn’t agree more with you on this. This is just the bitter truth.
    it's more than good seeing people thinking about life. Most are too lazy to think about such things.

    Marjan :)

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Creative, interesting, it held my interest throughout the poem. I love your rhyme scheme! Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Creative, interesting, it held my interest throughout the poem. I love your rhyme scheme! Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Creative, interesting, it held my interest throughout the poem. I love your rhyme scheme! Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by danielle

    I totally agree w/ you when you say the world is filled w/ hate anyways the poem was good

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