Wow, that is very touching. Very well written. No room for improvement in this poem.
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5/5

Oh, another heartfelt poem by you dear...
keep it up
you are really awsome and this great poem was the prove.

another 5/5 from me

This one has a very strong theme delivered in free verse

O wow, that just hits hard, hopefully it's not true, and if it is i'm terribly sorry. well it was very well written and even though sad and simple, it was powerful. beauitful poem, great write.

Its amazing how you made a very 'eye-opening' and realistic poem in such few lines! Great read under sad circumstances!5/5

You managed to write about such a heartbreaking subject with diplomacy and tact, and within a few lines you managed to portray so many emotions.
Beautiful work.

Wow, within such a short space, you created a powerful and remarkable image, this was awesome. i enjoyed the flow and the way it was written. Good job
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Wow this is a great poem .. it was short but you still said what you wanted to say and sent a clear message.. excellent job.. the flow was great and i really enjoyed reading it.. very well written.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

That was good, and blunt, i liked it.

Even though it was a short poem the message was clear.Great job.

Excellent and well penned. The flow and the meaning is perfect. Well described with sheer nice wordings. u got 5/5 from me. tc

Awesome ^^
to the point
and very flowing

love it

5/5

I liked it and i can relate...except the child part...but i sure did think i was pregnant for a lil sec. but this was a powerful poem and i hope its not true.

***ayshley***

That was well written.
A little dull in my opinion.
But also very good.

Wow this is really sad, but it's a great poem 5/5

This is very good

This was an okay poem. the flow could have been better. and maybe a little longer.. besides that i can feel the heartfelt words u put into this. good job.. a rate this a 3