IAM A LOSER

by Honey   Jun 25, 2007


Iam battling , battling hard

you aren't aware, you are attacking

i haven't had a opponent like u

you are the one , i was looking for

no blood , no injuries but pain

i know iam going to be the loser

i cant answer , to your tomahawks.

launched from your eyes to my heart

Still iam battling , battling hard.

you aren't aware , you crossed my borderline

through my eyes , slowly you are invading

in to me , straight in to my heart.

you won the battle , now you are ruling me.

Still you aren't aware.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Whitney

    Good work. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelvin Masi

    Awesome, gud poem! i love it. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Lovely Poem =]
    Just Wonderful!
    Very well penned and well written.
    Good Work.

    Keep SMiling =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Nice job Honey, i liked it ALOT i think u did GREAT on it! keep up ur talent, and keep on wirtting. 5/5 always
    Kate

    thanks for ur comments

  • 16 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Beautiful :) very nice good poem to post on here :) this site is manly for love and death :) i deal with the death ppart ;)