Comments : Homesick.

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "Longing,
    for those hands i've never held."

    Aw wow, this is a really beautiful poem. I guess we long for things that we cant have or havent experienced. But one day, at some point I guess we get to experience things like love. Its worth the wait. Great poem!

    Take Care:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    I can relate very much great write it is osm very good job!!! me likey

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Great poem ! I love it! :) keep it up :)
    5/5,,,, Your frend Melody.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Great poem ! I love it! :) Keep it up :)
    5/5,,,, Your friend Melody.

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow this poem is amazing i can relate and so can alot of other ppl great job!!!

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This is a beautiful poem dear. I really enjoyed reading it =) It's strange though.. I'm usually not fond of poems written like these but I just really liked this one for some odd reason. lol I loved your great choice of words =) The poem is really heart capturing..

    Hehe, 5/5 sweetie! And please, if you could, rate and comment my poem "No Tomorrow" <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Aww!!! that's so cute!!! <3
    5/5 -Liz

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Wow I loved this poem it is going into my favs...please keep writing and I will keep reading 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow so sad
    yet so powerful,
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    Great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Great poem i luv it, its cool u seem 2 b a great writer :)

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blaketooken

    Good job. It's a beautiful poem. You can really feel the passion. Good job. If u have a chance check out my quotes and poems.Peace,
    keani loves koa