"Longing,
for those hands i've never held."

Aw wow, this is a really beautiful poem. I guess we long for things that we cant have or havent experienced. But one day, at some point I guess we get to experience things like love. Its worth the wait. Great poem!

Take Care:)

I can relate very much great write it is osm very good job!!! me likey

laura

Great poem ! I love it! :) keep it up :)
5/5,,,, Your frend Melody.

Great poem ! I love it! :) Keep it up :)
5/5,,,, Your friend Melody.

Wow this poem is amazing i can relate and so can alot of other ppl great job!!!

laura

This is a beautiful poem dear. I really enjoyed reading it =) It's strange though.. I'm usually not fond of poems written like these but I just really liked this one for some odd reason. lol I loved your great choice of words =) The poem is really heart capturing..

Hehe, 5/5 sweetie! And please, if you could, rate and comment my poem "No Tomorrow" <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~

Aww!!! that's so cute!!! <3
5/5 -Liz

Wow I loved this poem it is going into my favs...please keep writing and I will keep reading 5/5

Wow so sad
yet so powerful,
keep it up!
-Lisa

Great poem

Great poem i luv it, its cool u seem 2 b a great writer :)

5/5

Good job. It's a beautiful poem. You can really feel the passion. Good job. If u have a chance check out my quotes and poems.Peace,
keani loves koa