Hero

by ellewen   Jun 30, 2007


If I were gone
tell me what is the reaction
is my absence some sort of satisfaction
or would you seek an action
If my body lie below the blue
would you cry if it were true?

Say you were the last person I called
would you convince yourself you were at fault
would you have reconsidered taking that call?
If you were there do you think I would have jumped at all?
If you had told me I lived a lie
Would you wish you hadn't made me cry?

standing at my grave
you look down at my face
and wish for my embrace
or thankful that I'm away
if you knew my thoughts what would you do?
If I had a hero would it be you?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought the ending was perfect and it flowed well, but on how many lines you have that rhyme was intersting but it was still very good

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney

    The last line was my favorite. Though the poem as a whole was amazing. Great write. Keep up the good work.
    *Brittney

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I like first and second stanza, but I don't like the third, it doesn't fit in the rest of the poem.
    I personally don't like poems which have rhymes, but this is a good one.
    You have excellent choice of words through the poem and it's uniquely written.
    4/5 (because of the last stanza)