More Than You

by Romancing the Darker Side   Jun 30, 2007


What if I told you
I didn't care what the reason
For leaving
Was this time?

Would you mind?
Would you cry?
Would you still sneak up to my room at night?

What if I said I
Didn't want to see you anymore
And I don't care why
Your truck isn't outside?

Would it even matter?
Would you even care?
Would you still up and leave at night?

What if I knew
I wanted to find
Something better
Something more than you?

Would it be right?
Would it be polite?
I need to find something more than you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought it was pretty good, its somthing others can really relate to and not something that people would just normally think about it, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    Great poem and great structure lol 5/5 i can relate sometimes

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was great very nice style 5/5 and nice transition maybe u can read one of mine.

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