i used to think that my best poems were my sad depressing ones, but now I know that I'm pretty good at happy ones too, thanx guys for ur in put, and it may be asking too much, but could you possibly read my others and comment on those too, it'd help even more.... :) thanx Manda

great poem i loved it keep writing you have a lot of talent

I appreciate the comments, im glad you guys think they're good, but aparently they're not 100 percent... so if you could explain why u aren't giving them fives then that'd be great!

hey amanda, i read your comment on my poem and i wanna say thanx,um lets see some pointers....um i really dont know just put all of your emotions in your writing make it like describe exactly how you feel inside dont leave any kind of feeling out,if your sad or hurt or mad just put it all together and see how it works thats what i do and thank you again for the comment

oh yeah and you poem is very good!