July 8th

by robin milford   Jul 1, 2007


July 8th
Once was a ordinary day
till the day I met you.

We turned a tragic day
into a remarkable night.

You treated me as a human
not a piece of meat.

As we talked
I felt myself falling,
falling deeply in love with you.

You made me smile,
You made me laugh
with your little song.

You asked for a kiss
that was so sweet.
It swept me of my feet
and into your bed.

That's where it happened
a remarkable, memorable night
Our first night
July 8th

this poem was written for my year anniversary which is July 8th

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  • 16 years ago

    by April McLaren

    Loved it it is so sweet and romantic good read keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    I think i have missed some of your new poems lol
    this is a great poem
    lots of meaning to it
    great job
    i hope your anniversary went well
    :):)

    keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This work was truly gorgeous and endearing. For a tribute, your emotions emanated through your words rather effectively. Lovely poem, as always. 5/5 ~Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was really sweet and beautiful. I enjoyed reading this Robin. Well done on creating a heartfelt emotion packed piece of poetry.~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by April McLaren

    Awesome poem and i really love it i hope that he will to and congrats

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