Bert, it been long time i haven't read your poems...

This was absolutely beautiful sad poems...i know how you feel my friend, just remember one thing, keep your head up high...you do take care.

This piece was honestly quite an emotional piece. You went into great depth with putting your emotions into this. The ryhme scheme was simple yet so very effective and I found this piece to be heartfelt and touching. Well done on writing this poem I enjoyed reading it.~mel

A very touching piece ,and one I understand ,beautifully done.

"If I cause pain and heartbreak
The responsibility for this I solemnly take"

There is a tinge of inexplicable mystery concealed between the lines, waiting to be deciphered, which I allegedly take as a description of romantic infidelity. How the subject have wrought it's own disaster in romance is spectacularly poignant whereby I was thrilled exceedingly.

It's an excellent piece of work. Thanks for sharing. And I hope you all the best and take care. ~Marian

What a sad piece you have written. The emotions are so heart breaking. Excellent imagery.

I had dreams of her happiness
Her touch, feel and her caress
All is gone, all is lost
I must pay the final cost

These lines really touched me.
Excellent!
Take care Cindy

Very good writing, I enjoyed reading your poem.

This is an outstanding poem, truly sad and when i read it it made me feel your pain and anguish of losing some one you obversly loved very much, great work, i hope to read more of your stuff soon

This was sad. =( a very touching piece.
lot of emotion and meaning coming through.
very well expressed. xx

This was really nicley written, hopefully you didnt really commit suicide cuase that would be really sad.. you have a great talent for poetry

Beautifully sad.....haunting lines:

I had dreams of her happiness
Her touch, feel and her caress
All is gone, all is lost
I must pay the final cost

Well written and deep.....all the best, Debbie

Many emotions and heartfelt words in this beautiful write...truly touches the heart...great job Bert...

hugs, Ann

You really expressed a lot in this poem. Flow was good, I like your other poems better sorry :| I think the only problem in this poem is.. you repeated many 'I' But it's still a beautiful poem :) I enjoyed reading it, well done