Great poem and well written ,wording was good and you are right , we need to learn to get along and be friends and not hate , great write , expressed very well , good job keep it up , your friend Tracy d. 5/5

Short but very effective. I don't like wording to much but subject is great. I like the ending the most. Keep up 5/5

"As to those who live with purpose
to destroy the lives of others
having lost the true compassion
they will loose their own creation!"

We as humans are capable of so much more, than what we are accomplishing in reality, but first we have to break away from hate. This is a really truthful poem, loved the last stanza too!

Take Care:)

This write speak with wisdom and a lesson for those that read it. Excellent write young lady enjoyed the read. May your heart once again find the peace and joy that you seek.

sadaddy
Scott

Nicely said.
Hits the nail on the head.
Love, peace, and harmony.
Rhiannon

Well dun
Love it

Danielle
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Very powerful words i loved it girly! keep it up 5/5 <33

Good poem.

This is so very much true. I like it alot. Awesome Job!

Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5