Please save me

by paul alexander   Jul 2, 2007


Please save me
i need some one
please kill me
my time is up
i need love
so i can go on
i need love
without it I'm done

please help me
get through this
do you hear me
i always ask you this
you don't reply
for this all i have to say
is that i hope to die
ill never be OK

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  • 16 years ago

    by LeaveMeHereToDie

    Omg i love this poem very strong and it is excatly wat ive tried to write but ive never had the words

    KeEp WrItInG

    p.s thnx for the comment x]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    Aww, well...i can see you are ready to be free in the world but you gotta find the strenths to fight your weakness away. I know it is hard, even through you gotta have a faith in yourself. Thats all it is important more than crying in pain. Hey, thanks for commenting my poem, "Thank You". AND keep it up 5/5.
    -K