Well done. Extremely ..beautiful, and wonderful poem. To tell you the truth, this is probably one of the best poems I've ever read. EVER. I believe this was written from the heart, and it takes a true poet to write a poem like this. It takes an ever better one to make me, yes ME, see whats going on. As I read it, I could just see everything. And sad to say, I cried. Let me tell you if you don't keep writing poetry like this, I'm gonna get very mad at you marc, haha. Seriously though, keep it up.

This was such a sweet and beautifully written poem. and the ending was so beautiful. well written. you have a way with putting words together and making something beautiful, just like this. great job.

Again, very beautiful yet sad. Your writing is very well and you use lots fo imagery..i like that:)

Aww!!!! This is a beautiful poem!!! Its so sad!!! I almost cried!! Very well written, and expressed!!!! I loved it!!!!!! Gr8 job!!!
Defnitely 5/5 =D
Take care!

Cartured my attention, and my heart, beautiful written, vivid imagery, strong emotion this one is my favorite by you so far, one of the best poems I have read all night. 5/5

This is a very sweet poem.
I really like the ending,
"She said, "I will never leave your side.."
Together we will depart this world.. Never to be apart.."
keep writing.
peace
soffe

GOD YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD POET! I WISH I WROTE AS WELL AS YOU DO!

Suddenly tears run down her angelic orbs.
The whole place was full of candles and red roses.
And there right in front of her a piece of paper.
"My heart will always and forever belong to you"

that was a great stanza and it made me want to cry.. keep writing and great work

Woow very good poem i really liked it and how you wordded it isi can tell it came from your hart

Oh my, this makes me want to cry! its so beautiful! such an amazing love story.. 5/5

That was well written!!..

Keep up the good work!>.

5/5...

Very well written poem. Very romantic. Lines are very touchy and good. Thanks for sharing.

I like dis poem its so true bt yet so elegant. I like d meaning. Man wat ppl do 4 love right, crazy

Mukhang inluv ka ka pardz ah,,
^^
ganda!
lufet mo tlga!
proud to be pinoy!
tnx!

This poem was brimming with romance, every girls dream, the images beautiful. Then the kicker at the end was heart wrenching. To finally have your love and realise they are only yours for a tiny moment in time was heart breaking. A rollercoaster of poetic emotion. Loved it. Milly x