Comments : Priceless Occasion

  • 13 years ago

    by lexie

    Wow,what a really honest poem.but its always good that way.beautifully done.
    one of those poems that really makes a person think.
    thanks again for commenting. =]

    --lexie

  • 13 years ago

    by unknown

    Beautiful poem. You started and ended your poem well. :)
    And the emotion on this poem is powerful.
    And the rhythm between 2nd and 4th line in every stanza is a plus point... :)
    Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Okay...each of your poems are so well thought out and have such an inspirational message. That's what I enjoy about them! I enjoy poets who really think it through and pour it out! My fave lines are

    "Who says you have to throw away the memories,
    That you were clearly meant to keep?"

    Great job! 5/5
    Charisma*

  • 13 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow this is great.. you really make a good point with the questions you ask.. how simple things can just change someone and certain things they once believed it.. excellent job.. i really enjoyed it.. 5/5.. and thanks for the comment =]

  • 13 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Your poems make me think alot. i think this poem is sending people a message, like we all need to wake up to ourselves. once again this poem really made me think. i'm really liking what ive read of your work so far. =]
    5/5
    .x

  • 13 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Hmmm.. i dont really know what to say about this poem except it was just wonderful. couldnt have been done better
    .x

  • 13 years ago

    by Mr M

    Well done mindy....everyone should feel this way and learn from experiences...not carry bagage

  • 13 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    That was nicely done, I really liked it, Your rhyming was flawless and didnt seem forced and it flowed perfectly,5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great one, you asked very important questions in it. I like its flow and the wording is excellent.
    Well done, good job, 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    Great job.i liked the flow and everything else about the poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Awesome poem, a strong feeling packed into a great poem. incredible.

    your servant:
    david

  • 13 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I cant exactly agree with your poem but i loved the voice i heard in this poem 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Hey Mindy :)

    This was a well penned poem, Flow was flawless, the word choice really fits the poem. Well done

    How do you hate someone you once loved,
    When you promised them forever?
    ^^ I really love those two lines.. It reminded me of someone..

    5/5 as always!

  • 13 years ago

    by LyricallyBroken

    That was a very strong and good poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessica

    I love it !
    i dont love many poems bbut i love this one
    AMAZING writer !

  • 13 years ago

    by Roland Amaranto

    Perfect... smooth. The meaning for me is correct, why wont people think of it that way... you have a great mind.
    keep up the good work
    this is a, not good.., it was great poem

    cheers. ^^

  • 13 years ago

    by kellymarie

    Thankyou, what a positive and wonderful way to think,,, how right you are...

  • 13 years ago

    by Cody Cunningham

    Hey, I liked this poem, really had feeling. It put me in a place of feeling. Also when I got on here I read your message on of about you. Honestly, I like it, lol, no joke. I thought it was and well you get to the point, you don't care what people think, and I feel the same way. Ight well later Message me back some. Name's Cody Cunningham or CJ. Ight well later

  • 13 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very very good
    i agree completly
    nice work
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Viola

    WOW! what an incredibly insighful poem. I love this. makes us all think. you present a great view here that sadly not many of us see.
    Though love may end in sorrow, if it brought you nothing but happiness while you were experiencing it, then why dread it?..
    that is a great point. and i do agree with it very much.
    i was especially amazed with this stanza:

    Who's to say that all happiness is lost,
    Just because someone hurt you deep?
    Who says you have to throw away the memories,
    That you were clearly meant to keep?

    the part about the memories is so true. i hold my memories safe with me all the time and never hate the people who have hurt me.

    the poem flowed well. the emotion behind it was deep. and it was generally well penned. a great write!
    keep it up
    --Viola