Wow this is great.. you really make a good point with the questions you ask.. how simple things can just change someone and certain things they once believed it.. excellent job.. i really enjoyed it.. 5/5.. and thanks for the comment =]
Your poems make me think alot. i think this poem is sending people a message, like we all need to wake up to ourselves. once again this poem really made me think. i'm really liking what ive read of your work so far. =]
Hey, I liked this poem, really had feeling. It put me in a place of feeling. Also when I got on here I read your message on of about you. Honestly, I like it, lol, no joke. I thought it was and well you get to the point, you don't care what people think, and I feel the same way. Ight well later Message me back some. Name's Cody Cunningham or CJ. Ight well later
WOW! what an incredibly insighful poem. I love this. makes us all think. you present a great view here that sadly not many of us see.
Though love may end in sorrow, if it brought you nothing but happiness while you were experiencing it, then why dread it?..
that is a great point. and i do agree with it very much.
i was especially amazed with this stanza:
Who's to say that all happiness is lost,
Just because someone hurt you deep?
Who says you have to throw away the memories,
That you were clearly meant to keep?
the part about the memories is so true. i hold my memories safe with me all the time and never hate the people who have hurt me.
the poem flowed well. the emotion behind it was deep. and it was generally well penned. a great write!
keep it up