Crystal tears

by Taz   Jul 3, 2007


I told him i hate him,
for he broke my heart.

i told him it was over,
forever apart.

but i cant live without him,
and i cant let him go,
for i am still in love with him.

but he betrayed me and fed me lie after lie,
and i believed him.

and ill love him till the day i die

but i found it was time for my fairytale to end and brake the ties between our inseparable hearts.

crystal tears ran down my cheek as i swept passed him

he had caused me so much pain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    I like this poem...good job :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Very beautiful poem Taz, it was well written and very wonderful. Sad too, I can definitely relate to this piece of work.. so full of emotion. Keep up the great job, I look forward to reading more work from you! 5/5 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Great poem!:)I feel the same right now, and your poem made me cry!
    5/5,,,,Melody :)

  • 16 years ago

    by XxFeelingsx4xYouxX

    Loved it! Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cody Cunningham

    Hey thanks for my comment, and I really this one, you let people know what it's really like to feel heartbreak, to be crushed by someone you simply love. But love or not over time all things heal. I promise, although things do take time.

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