This is a great poem very creative and great feeling and emotion it is a wonderful piece that you expressed youself very well in

laura

"With the melody of a dove;
Fill my goblet with lasting love,
Until it reaches high above"

these were my favorite lines.it was a beautiful write,i don't think it could've been said better.the love was definitly there. =]
5/5 keep it up!

--lexie

Short, but god dam good! =]] Wow, you did a really good job on this one! Great work! =]]
The 1st 2 lines are amazing and using them again just worked really well!
5/5
.x

It's pretty freaking sweet!
Nice use of words and very creative. 5/5 from me.

I thought it was pretty good, the flow was good till the end and you switched the way it was written, but it was still really good, i give it a 5/5

Great job expressing these feelings, i especially liked the last couple of lines. keep up the good work!

Thanks for the comment on my poem! this one of yours is really good..it sounds like something that came out of a romeo and juliet novel!

I like triolets (:
this is crisp and lasting, and they flow so well, they and this are flawless.

great work.

Tom

Nice, simple, easy to remember, i like it!

your servant:
david

Beautifully penned poem! :) You have a great vocab, Flow was flawless, I think it was perfect, well done!

5/5 all the way!