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Wow! I'm speahless! That was incredible, an I felt all the emotion in this poem. The lines:

People say I am golden,
But yet I feel like dirt,

Really captured my attention. It kinda reminds me of myself. Keep it up, and if I could, I'd say 6/5 :D

Hatori

Cryptic, enigmatic yet insightful in the knowledge we have shared...so very well written.

Wow. i loved this poem i could really relate you know how looks can be desivin well ppl make up assumptions abot u and then expect you 2 live up to them. loved it! 5/5

My favourite stanza,
"Why am I so empty,
Why is my heart so torn,
I know I should be happy,
But I just feel so worn"
great poem.
5/5.

Oh god that was a perfect poem filled with great emotion, you know what you almost made me cry as before reading this poem my MSN message was saying (I FEEL SO DISAPPOINTED AND WANT TO CRY) and when i read this poem i felt like someone just has written it for me,lol
great job.

Really cute and nice. Well expressed feelings. I like the wordings and you have explained your situation well. Deserved 5/5

I really liked this.
The emotion is definitely in the words, and the ending is beautiful, really intense and powerful.
Flow is good throughout the entire piece, the only thing I can suggest with this is maybe take some of the fillers out to make the flow flawless.

Beautiful.
I love this, not only because I can relate but it is a great poem.
Great Job!
5/5
=]
((Amber))

I love this one,its very sad...but yeah its realy god

WOW OMG I LOVE THIS ONE TOO

I love this poem.its sad.so full of emotion.great job.

I liked the poem a great deal.
i was very well written,
great emotion.

keep it up.

I like the 'questions' in the poem. Flow was good and I love the emotions running in the poem.

People say I am golden,
But yet I feel like dirt,
^^ I love those lines.

5/5 keep it up!

This is a Beautiful poem
i love the hole thing
the emotion
the wording
everything!
another great job
5/5
xox Jess

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your so great!
i love your writing!
keep it up!

Another great one. If you ever need to talk about anything I'm here...and yes that might seem odd coming from someone who doesn't even know you or who you don't know but it's the truth. I hope you keep writing amazing poems such as this one. Now I must go and read some more of your poems...

I loved the poem its like all that was deep down in your heart and you just pulled it out it was really good!!

Wow. it was beautifully written, i loved it. your the one with talent, i love your writing. nice work, my fave stanza was the second one. 5/5

Wow. ok..the emotion in this is incredible!
i really love the way it's all put together.
the wording is very simple..but it brings out your feeling excatly.
this stanza for me really hit home (if you know what i mean) :
"I am too young,
To be so broken and hurt,
People say I am golden,
But yet I feel like dirt"

the whole poem was really well done. great work! and keep it up!!
--Viola