One Cut Led to My Death

by K3LSI3   Jul 4, 2007


One cut
Two cut
Three cut
Four
I drop the blade to the floor.
Five cut
Six cut
Seven cut
Eight
The bloods so close it's like a date.
Nine cut
Ten cut
I think it's my time to end.
I lost a lot of blood.
I'll miss you my dear friend.

please comment and rate.thnx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is a good poem...it could probably use more description..but it still an enjoyable poem to read..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    I dont even know what to say about it..
    It was a great poem like all your other ones..
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think that you have a good idea with the poem and that if you made it a bit longer and put some more stanza's in it would be a lot better. It's still a great poem as is though 5/5 GG23

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