I love your poem i felt you wrote it from the bottom of your heart 5/5.

Real sweet. It's very calming and mellow. It really felt like you had more than enough experience to write like this

What a touching....heartfelt piece. Nicely penned.

Ow sweety this is rly nice!its so sad but i loved it!..rly 5/5..keep it up babe!

Moving piece there hunni felt like i was in the room with you at one point! really good

p.s the last line or 2nd from last u spelt piece wrong :) tis the only thing

Emotionally heartfelt.... very touching.

Just one minor thing, piece should be peace. Other than that it flows nicely and its well written. Its always hard to lose someone, but as you said, memories live on and they are here with you in spirit as well.

I really really really really like this quote of yours!

"In the still of the night, is where dreams come true. In the still of the night is where my heart longs for you.
always wanting always seeking you. But then again dreams are made to come true."

It's so good. But anyway, about the poem.... It's really good. It made me feel sad and happy, it was weird. These lines also really hit home....

"rest in pice sweet darling
your spirit filled with love."

Great job again! 5/5!

~Kat~