What I live for

by Liz   Jul 5, 2007


The ring of my cell phone
to know someone cares
enough to call me

it's part of what I live for

the sight of a new poetry comment
to know someone cares
enough to read an rate the poetry thats a big part of me

it's part of what I live for

the sight of a new private message
to know someone cares
enough to write personally to me

it's part of what I live for

a number other than 0 in my e-mail in-box
to know someone cares
enough to write me

it's part of what I live for

a high 5,smile or wave from someone
to know they care
enough to show they know me

it's part of what I live for

a hug, sometimes kiss or tears
from a friend
to know someone cares
enough to love me

it's part of what I live for

it seems that what I live for is so hard to get
so depressing not to get
to see no new comments,private messages or e-mails
to not hear my phone ring, get a wave/smile or be given a hug
it makes me wanna cri
but the hope of getting what I live for is what keeps me from wanting to die

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  • 16 years ago

    by Donyelle

    Hey, now that's wats up.... you're very talented with the poems to be so young you know. thats good, keep up the good poetry and i'll stay reading lol....

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Oooo guess what this is someone caring:):) lol good poem it was a great read lol though there is some spelling errors but it is still good and thx for the comment on my poem

    i did go out with her but she did somehting while we were going out and i had to break up with her because i couldnt talk or anything to her without thinking of what she did but now ive started talking to her again and i have never met her i met her though this site actually lol so i dont just like her for her looks i am not shallow lol i like her for who she is she was wonderful in the beginning but then she changed lol well thx again for the comment good job also

    sry it is such a long commnet lol

    keenan