Comments : Eye catching*please dont read if your an eye catcher

  • 16 years ago

    by Jul

    Wow..amazing job

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    I love the personification here it really hooked me to the poem...great job

    *^*crow*^*

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Okay.. now this one is really sad.. It reminded me of my school days.. I rarely go to school.. and When I go to school I was always late..

    I love the emotions in it.. I can really feel it, good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Weird but i like it.. keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Mary

    Luv it<333 keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArtxx

    Its just so shocking. so much emotion into just one poem, how much blades can mean to one person and what they can do. how they feel when they enter the class room and how they feel when they cut. its shocking.. yet brilliant.

  • 16 years ago

    by cassanova

    Thats just great

  • 16 years ago

    by cassanova

    So much feelings

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    I rly like that its rly good.

  • 16 years ago

    by kia

    Really related i was that girl too. Loved the imagery and idea work. Loved the blades character. Like a little helping and willing smurf. You dont even realise its being bad untill you think about it because its so innocent

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Once i started reading i couldnt stop i had 2 finish it hooked me great job and very emotional

    5/5