Needs a name

by Breeeezie   Jul 5, 2007


When i close my eyes
i don't picture my life
oh how it went before
see Hun before you entered
I've seen flashes of evil!
I've seen red rivers
I've seen black tears
but you woke me up
thank you!
i was worried no one could hear my screams
i was worried the fears were my life
now I'm with you
I'm the luckiest gurl in the world
to wake up with the sun shining
looking into your beautiful eyes
hoping each moment that passes by
is a moment that will never be forgotten
and if one day a moment is forgotten
hopefully found in our eyes
hopefully found in the treasure box
i sleep with under my pillow
the teddy bear beside me
the picture of you on my wall

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I think it was a great poem. Flow was okay for me :) just a suggestion to capitalize some letters hihi :D

    i seen flashes of evil!
    i seen red rivers
    i seen black tears
    ^ it should be.. "I've seen.."

    Thanks for the comment! you made me smile :)