This poem is one of the greatest lost love poems i have ever read wel done
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HOLY CRAP

This is AWESOME.
Beautifully and elegantly written, and so much emotion and depth...you did a wonderful job with this.

I super duper love it..

i think that it was supurb, great emotion and depth.. keep writing

This double Triolet seemed to be a soul seaching piece written from the heart

Another eloquent poem. (: Great example of a triolet. Heartbreaking, sincere, fluid, intriguing. A well penned and thought out piece. Lovely!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Excellent write, so emotional within. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

I like this poem 5/5 its realy deep and the flow was good.

I have never had the words just taken from my mouth untill i read this ... when i finished it i thought to myself omg the words were taken right out of my head and trown from my mouth .. one of the best ones i have read so far ...all i can say is talent!!