Comments : I miss you

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like wording and ending, but rest is good. This is not classic love poem which is great. You expressed emotions very well and this one deserves 5/5.(but others of your poems that I read are even more better)

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Its not the best flow. But it is a very good poem for beginers. Better than most of my begining poems I can tell you that hun.

    Keep writing.

    Always and forever

    [Deathly'Amore]

  • 16 years ago

    by Cody Cunningham

    I like this...but in the first line you should fix the "no" to now...I think you missed that..but other than that it's great really good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by ashleeey

    I really loved this poem a lot, mostly because i could relate to it. you're amazing, keep writing. <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Excellent
    a very practical situation many lovers go through
    keep it up
    really awesome poetry
    5/5
    your new friend
    Rohan

    Will you read my love poems plz?or any other poems
    tc

  • Hey dats a very very good poem wel written

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Yet another sweet poem..... keep up the best writing as well as its expressions..

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by Jakki HxC Self Mutilation

    Sad. But I love it... Very well written.
    Can relate to feelings. 5/5
    -Jackie

  • 16 years ago

    by Aubrey

    This reminds me of Ricky.
    He lives in Tennessee. :'[
    Great Poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by holly

    Wow. it has so much meaning. i like it a whole lot. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by sha

    God. this is SWEET!

  • 16 years ago

    by kraz33 beautiful

    I really love this poem, its exactly how i feel sometimes! thanks for the comment on my poem!
    Keep it up, you have a talent:)

  • 16 years ago

    by chances

    I like this poem, i feel like i can relate, it's sad but its true,

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    I know how u feel sometimes i feel the same way but people seem to think i dont have emotions cuz in person i really dont show that i feel any pain u kno

  • 16 years ago

    by MiRAy3

    AWWWWW! T3ARz*
    i L0V3 iT =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Aimar

    Nice i love ur poem keep on good work

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Excellent!!!

    It was beautiful...!!!!

    Veryy well written

    Best choices of words

    :D

    5/5

    I will comment more like tomorrow ot something because i am not writing good comments right now lol

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    This is probably my favorite poem because I can relate to every single line. Its just amazing how this poem is exactly how I feel lately.
    I Love It!
    Your Amazing =]

  • 15 years ago

    by I Love Him But Sssh

    You Have Explained Things That I Have Been Through Using The Most Simple Words And Sentences
    Really Good :) x

  • 14 years ago

    by Single girl

    I can so relate to this... good work