I've Lost Lifes Fight

by .mommy_3   Jul 7, 2007


I don't know what to do
don't know where to run
this life is a battle..
and guess who won?

I've lost all hope
I've lost life's fight
everything in my life
never goes right..

the tears are taking over..
and all I feel is pain..
I've never been happy
I've always been this way..

I've lost life's fight..
don't know what to do..
I guess my only solution is
to say I'm through..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Niinaa

    Amazing, powerful and well written, someone with such talent is going to be very successfull in life, Keep Up The Good Work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow powerful work
    sad but nicely writen
    keep it up
    -take care
    Lisa

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    I can relate..I really love this poem..well written poem..like it..
    -sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    5/5 if not more... that was truly amazing.. well done.. i loved it.. i've been feeling a lot like that recently but i haven't found the words to say it, not in a poem or quotes or even to myself but you've said it all so well so well done n tanx btw hpe you stop feelin lyk dat soon! x

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